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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : But you did not ???



غرام
04-08-03, 02:34 PM
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dear all members


This poem here is the first drop in the English Ramsa



This poem is one of the most great poem in the English literature at least in my point of view, dear you in the bottom line you will find the theme of the poem I wish you like it

The tilte of the words is But you didn’t

I looked at you and smiled the other way
I thought you would see me but you didn’t
I said I love you and waited what you would say
I thought you’d here me but you didn’t
I drew a picture just for you to see
I thought you would save it but you didn’t
I made a fort for us back in the woods
I thought you would camp with me but you didn’t
I needed you just to talk to, my thoughts to share
I thought you would want to but you didn’t
I told you about the game hoping you be there
I thought you would surely come but you didn’t
I asked you to share my youth with me
I thought you would want to but you couldn’t
My country called me for war, you asked me to come back safely
BUT I DID NOT !!!




I hope that u did get the massege behind this poem

do not loose the happy days of your life


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alamri
04-08-03, 02:59 PM
Thank u '3ram for this poem
and i hope to see alot on this ramsah


with my best regard

alamri

غرام
04-08-03, 03:36 PM
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dear alamri

When i see your name

I feel happy

really happy

coz

u are always there

to share me the words and the feelings

dear

i wanna say

that iam soo happy

to find you dear name here

GOD BLESS U


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alamri
04-08-03, 04:37 PM
dear '3ram

thank you alot about what you said

and thanks for god that at least i keep one person on this life happy

thank you '3ram alot

accept this from me ro4



do your best on this ramsah

غرام
04-08-03, 05:04 PM
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alamri

your soft heart and feeling

make me

how can i describe it

u are like

the cloud

soft and white


coz u are beside me i will go on


dear

your words are priceless


GOD BLESS U


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by the way

thanx for the rose


it is sweet as your heart

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المقنع
12-08-03, 09:04 AM
thanx brother Ghram for the poem it is very nice i wish u all the best in ur future

continue writting such poems
best regards

غرام
12-08-03, 02:21 PM
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Dear

المقنع
or shall I say "the man with the mask"

dear

thanx for your sweet words

but

you have not read the intriduction of the poem carefully
:(

Iam not the one whome did write the poem

this poem in very famous in the litreature

but i wish if i could write such great words with great theme like this

dear

your second mistake is about me

iam not man

iam a woman
:(
:(
:(



anyway

i like to see another member join us in the english ramsa



MAY GOD BLESS U

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GIANNI VERSACE
14-08-03, 08:11 PM
Gorgeous words Garam

and wonderfull taste

just GO ON

your's

GIANNI

غرام
15-08-03, 02:03 PM
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dear

GIANNI VERSACE

when i see

star

in the heart of sky

i feel lonesome

i feel that iam far away from

the earth

but when i see

new name here

i feel that

the beauty is not only in the sky

but its here

close to me

your name

is like a star

in the darkness

can i say

that we have

now

new star

in our small kingdom




yours


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GIANNI VERSACE
20-08-03, 12:30 PM
in your peom, your words are the starts

that were the gift you gave

to this

great ramsa

you deserve

my respect

and

honor

you are the champ

so you deserve

this


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GIANNI

غرام
22-08-03, 02:37 PM
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dear

GIANNI


do i deserve this

i am so happy

this is a great honur




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